<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一位三和大神隨手在橋下寫道：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我若到得閻王筆，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咬牙含淚判自己。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">再賒孟婆十碗湯，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忘卻前世悲苦傷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 沒(méi)想到的是迎來(lái)網(wǎng)友的史詩(shī)級(jí)詩(shī)詞對(duì)決，首先出場(chǎng)的是一位貴州的網(wǎng)友寫道：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寧做地府流浪鬼，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不做人間苦命人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我若到得閻王筆，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咬牙含背叛自己。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一筆勾盡前塵事，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二筆斷盡今生情，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三筆寫下黃泉路，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">從此不再問(wèn)歸程，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奈何橋頭風(fēng)蕭瑟，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忘川河畔淚無(wú)聲，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">若有來(lái)世再相逢，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愿做孤魂不做人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 此詩(shī)一出徹底覺醒網(wǎng)友們藏在骨子里的詩(shī)仙血脈，有異曲同工之妙的還有這位廣東網(wǎng)友：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">早知人間皆是苦，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">絕不投胎入世俗，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寧做地府一縷魂，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不做世間萬(wàn)般人，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">百年人間留不住，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三千繁華如浮云，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">若非身負(fù)千金丹，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">早就人鬼兩殊途。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 好家伙，要是網(wǎng)友生在古代也許就要和李白搶飯吃了。還有這位安徽網(wǎng)友：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奈何橋畔風(fēng)嗚咽，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">生死簿上刻流年，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孟婆執(zhí)勺立寒川，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青瓷碗底漾忘泉，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">前世悲歡皆入盞，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飲盡相思散如煙，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黃泉路上影闌珊，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">皆是紅塵未了緣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 當(dāng)初先生退出文壇，我是極力反對(duì)的同樣是九年義務(wù)教育，為何你的文筆如此優(yōu)秀，而這位山東網(wǎng)友出場(chǎng)后，更是將這灑脫之意境推向巔峰：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青絲白發(fā)一瞬間，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">年華老去向誰(shuí)言，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)風(fēng)雨雨幾十載，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">轉(zhuǎn)眼黃土埋胸前，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一生如牛不得閑，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">得閑已與山共眠，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春風(fēng)若有憐花意，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可否許我再少年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 然而這位重慶網(wǎng)友質(zhì)疑這詩(shī)是怎么寫上去時(shí)，也隨手寫上一首詩(shī)：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日思柴米夜思錢，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忙碌半生未得閑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">也想飲酒抱花眠，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奈何月俸三五千。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">空有凌云千般志，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">負(fù)了落花負(fù)紅顏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一心一意去掙錢，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不知不覺已中年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三餐四季雖滿意，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">午夜更是難入眠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山不老我不閑，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一生忙碌為油鹽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)風(fēng)雨雨幾十年，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">轉(zhuǎn)眼黃土埋胸前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我笑青山顏不變，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">青山笑我已暮年。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橋下詩(shī)詞合集·人間煙火與歲月情長(zhǎng)（增補(bǔ)版）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開篇引玉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原文：我若到得閻王筆，咬牙含淚判自己。再賒孟婆十碗湯，忘卻前世悲苦傷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朗讀節(jié)奏：二二三/二二三/二三四/二三四（重讀“咬牙含淚”“忘卻悲苦”，尾字拖腔顯悵然）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、網(wǎng)友雅和</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">貴州網(wǎng)友·孤魂灑脫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原文：寧做地府流浪鬼，不做人間苦命人。我若到得閻王筆，咬牙含淚判自己。一筆勾盡前塵事，二筆斷盡今生情。三筆寫下黃泉路，從此不再問(wèn)歸程。奈何橋頭風(fēng)蕭瑟，忘川河畔淚無(wú)聲。若有來(lái)世再相逢，愿做孤魂不做人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朗讀節(jié)奏：二二三/二二三/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四（“三筆”系列短句提速顯決絕，“風(fēng)蕭瑟”“淚無(wú)聲”放緩，尾句重讀“孤魂不做人”）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">廣東網(wǎng)友·紅塵通透</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原文：早知人間皆是苦，絕不投胎入世俗。寧做地府一縷魂，不做世間萬(wàn)般人。百年人間留不住，三千繁華如浮云。若非身負(fù)千金擔(dān)，早就人鬼兩殊途。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朗讀節(jié)奏：二二三/二二三/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四（“皆是苦”“萬(wàn)般人”重讀，“如浮云”輕讀顯通透，尾句收束有力）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">安徽網(wǎng)友·相思未了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原文：奈何橋畔風(fēng)嗚咽，生死簿上刻流年。孟婆執(zhí)勺立寒川，青瓷碗底漾忘泉。前世悲歡皆入盞，飲盡相思散如煙。黃泉路上影闌珊，皆是紅塵未了緣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朗讀節(jié)奏：二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四（全程舒緩，“風(fēng)嗚咽”“散如煙”“未了緣”拖腔，顯纏綿悵然）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山東網(wǎng)友·歲月嘆惋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原文：青絲白發(fā)一瞬間，年華老去向誰(shuí)言。風(fēng)風(fēng)雨雨幾十載，轉(zhuǎn)眼黃土埋胸前。一生如牛不得閑，得閑已與山共眠。春風(fēng)若有憐花意，可否許我再少年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朗讀節(jié)奏：二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四（“一瞬間”“向誰(shuí)言”重讀，“再少年”尾字上揚(yáng)，藏祈愿之情）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">重慶網(wǎng)友·煙火無(wú)奈</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原文：日思柴米夜思錢，忙碌半生未得閑。也想飲酒抱花眠，奈何月俸三五千?？沼辛柙魄О阒荆?fù)了落花負(fù)紅顏。一心一意去掙錢，不知不覺已中年。三餐四季雖滿意，午夜更是難入眠。青山不老我不閑，一生忙碌為油鹽。風(fēng)風(fēng)雨雨幾十年，轉(zhuǎn)眼黃土埋胸前。我笑青山顏不變，青山笑我已暮年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朗讀節(jié)奏：二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四（前半段平緩，“三五千”“已中年”“難入眠”重讀，尾句“笑我已暮年”放緩顯滄桑）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三和大神·隨性補(bǔ)續(xù)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原文：終日奔波為碎銀，浮生難得半日真。橋洞遮風(fēng)又避雨，醉里不談世間塵。也曾有夢(mèng)闖乾坤，奈何現(xiàn)實(shí)磨一身。若能賒得三分閑，不做神佛不做臣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朗讀節(jié)奏：二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四/二三四（“碎銀”“磨一身”重讀，“醉里不談”輕讀顯隨性，尾句上揚(yáng)顯灑脫）</span></p>