<p class="ql-block">?挑水宣傳詩鐘優(yōu)選月集</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">評(píng)前語：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">不知不覺，詩鐘練習(xí)聯(lián)評(píng)活動(dòng)已滿一月，因幾個(gè)新社的創(chuàng)作需要有所提高，融入詩鐘大團(tuán)隊(duì)中去，自2022.02.20日開始每日一題活動(dòng)，由本人每日點(diǎn)評(píng)，從中選優(yōu)，集優(yōu)成篇，初涉點(diǎn)評(píng)，現(xiàn)將近一月優(yōu)鐘歸隊(duì)做集。本人水平有限點(diǎn)評(píng)難免不足之處，望各鐘社鐘友多提寶貴意見。得罪之處還請海涵包容，共同學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步。合作愉快????也祝每日一題越辦越好，開心敲鐘每一天。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> 一一一一一挑水</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"> 2022.03.20</p><p class="ql-block">??????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第一期優(yōu)鐘作品集：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?詩鐘練習(xí)每日一題2022.03.03蟬聯(lián)格“二月”</span></p><p class="ql-block">出題：挑水</p><p class="ql-block">簡評(píng)：挑水</p><p class="ql-block">發(fā)布：挑水 宣傳</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">A卷：響鐘</p><p class="ql-block">A-：響鐘微疵</p><p class="ql-block">B卷：病卷</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10.一灣靜水沉明月</p><p class="ql-block">二陣清風(fēng)送彩霞</p><p class="ql-block">劉如風(fēng)<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：通順</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">30.一刀劈碎潭中月，</p><p class="ql-block">二箭彈飛鏡里星。</p><p class="ql-block">王會(huì)計(jì)<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：活潑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">39.一泓碧水浮春月，</p><p class="ql-block">二斗恒星耀玉霄。</p><p class="ql-block">梁潔<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43.詩癡唱和耽無二，</p><p class="ql-block">月老姻緣引有雙。</p><p class="ql-block">陳莪 <span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：好事成雙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">69.三人共賦巜瑤臺(tái)月》</p><p class="ql-block">二友同迷巜錦帳春》</p><p class="ql-block">蹇開翠<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：詞牌銜接不錯(cuò)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">83.一牛總喘因慌月，</p><p class="ql-block">二虎常爭為占山。</p><p class="ql-block">鄉(xiāng)愁<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：工整</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?2022.03.04魁斗格：“飛龍”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">3.飛刀刻活下山虎，</p><p class="ql-block">舞墨描靈出海龍。</p><p class="ql-block">王會(huì)計(jì)<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：好手藝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">32.龍頭二月隨春舉，</p><p class="ql-block">雁翼三秋識(shí)候飛。</p><p class="ql-block">高峰<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：侯有酌余地</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">41.飛湍橫瀉疑藏鶴，</p><p class="ql-block">寶劍斜飛欲化龍。</p><p class="ql-block">張聲文<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：妙，想像力豐富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">45.龍騰大海驚魚散</p><p class="ql-block">虎嘯深林嚇鳥飛</p><p class="ql-block">簡月<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：龍尊虎威</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">55.龍舟側(cè)畔鑼聲急，</p><p class="ql-block">虎旆中間鼓影飛。</p><p class="ql-block">鄒艷明<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：好一派激蕩龍舟場面壯觀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.07鼎峙格：“桃花雨”（三字連線成等腰三角形即可，不分大小、倒正。）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">16.花田野杏期春雨，</p><p class="ql-block">柳畔嬌桃沐愷風(fēng)。</p><p class="ql-block">白楊<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block">愷風(fēng)：和風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：畔有再酌空間</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43.桃園春色逢甘雨，</p><p class="ql-block">竹地名花得暖風(fēng)。</p><p class="ql-block">孫源<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：此花虛指可</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">詩鐘練習(xí)女神節(jié)特別節(jié)目</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?2022.03.08湯網(wǎng)格：“女兒情”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嵌頭尾，直角三角形</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">17.恨莫虧心嘲瓦女，</p><p class="ql-block">情當(dāng)慎意教璋兒。</p><p class="ql-block">周娜<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：兒女平等，傳播正能量當(dāng)贊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35.女孝持家爹滿意</p><p class="ql-block">兒忠報(bào)國母舒情</p><p class="ql-block">施賦<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：不錯(cuò)，舒有再斟余地</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">2022.03.09一唱：“夢安”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">12.安石風(fēng)流賢相范，</p><p class="ql-block">夢溪謹(jǐn)敕后人師。</p><p class="ql-block">戴新<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block">注：安石 晉謝安 夢溪 宋鄭若沖</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：為人表率當(dāng)贊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">14.夢想悠閑憑警枕，</p><p class="ql-block">安知禍患起蕭墻。</p><p class="ql-block">金玉芬<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：有憂患意識(shí)好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">29.安溪坐賞云舒卷</p><p class="ql-block">夢澤行吟月缺圓</p><p class="ql-block">鄒艷明<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A</span></p><p class="ql-block">注：安溪，福建安溪縣，夢澤，云夢澤，古有云夢二澤，今在洞庭湖一帶）</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：好，化典無痕</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">33.安耽飯食捫心咽</p><p class="ql-block">夢寐金錢放膽花</p><p class="ql-block">肖致遠(yuǎn)<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：有夢想才會(huì)成功</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.10鴻爪格：“布谷歌”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不規(guī)則三角形</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5.谷口布云松列陣，</p><p class="ql-block">橋頭引水柳彈歌。</p><p class="ql-block">金玉芬<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：彈還有再酌空間</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">21.春芽布陣開新局，</p><p class="ql-block">秋谷收盤奏凱歌。</p><p class="ql-block">高洪斌<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：好，春華秋實(shí)，春播秋收，有理有據(jù)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">2022.03.11一唱：“順豐”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.順利栽苗均旺盛，</p><p class="ql-block">豐收載谷滿歡欣。</p><p class="ql-block">申國鳳<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：不錯(cuò)，喜氣洋洋躍然紙上</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">8. 豐湖粉面荷花艷，</p><p class="ql-block">順岸青絲柳樹柔。</p><p class="ql-block">袁桂杰<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：好，鐘眼穩(wěn)，豐湖地名在廣東惠陽西。順岸陽江市閘坡鎮(zhèn)，都雙關(guān)了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">23.順歲當(dāng)為難日備</p><p class="ql-block">豐年應(yīng)惜不時(shí)需</p><p class="ql-block">鄒艷明<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：雖覺小合，但知珍惜，A—應(yīng)推精神</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">31.豐饒沃土添詩意</p><p class="ql-block">順美青山蘊(yùn)畫情</p><p class="ql-block">王麗<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：好，好山好水好風(fēng)光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.16五唱：“迷惑”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35.我佛開光迷眼凈</p><p class="ql-block">仙人解夢惑心明</p><p class="ql-block">肖昌軍<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：仙有再酌余地，此句勝在鐘眼穩(wěn)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">45.常耽酒色迷心腦</p><p class="ql-block">總醉花香惑眼眉</p><p class="ql-block">王麗<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：此句鐘眼穩(wěn)勝出</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.17鼎峙格：“花見羞”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">等腰三角形不分大小，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">14.疏林有見長生果；</p><p class="ql-block">羞草空遮百合花。</p><p class="ql-block">范圍<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：長生果，百合花好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">16.武曌催花呈霸氣，</p><p class="ql-block">阮孚羞槖見清風(fēng)。</p><p class="ql-block">戴新<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：霸氣清風(fēng)皆人物品性</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">24.花容帶笑逢春見</p><p class="ql-block">月色含羞入夜來</p><p class="ql-block">施賦<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：不錯(cuò)，唯妙唯肖如在眼前</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">25.園中約見書遮怯，</p><p class="ql-block">花下談情袖掩羞。</p><p class="ql-block">陳國華<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：姿態(tài)不勝嬌羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">2022.03.18二唱：“風(fēng)骨”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">33.荷風(fēng)淡雅田園氣，</p><p class="ql-block">柳骨輕柔山水圖。</p><p class="ql-block">王富貴<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：不錯(cuò)，畫面和諧雅致</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">37.梅骨生成霜雪怕</p><p class="ql-block">蘭風(fēng)蓄就水云驚</p><p class="ql-block">郎中<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：精神可嘉，驚可再斟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">38.梅骨橫斜輕寵辱，</p><p class="ql-block">蘭風(fēng)濃淡慣沉浮。</p><p class="ql-block">鄒艷明<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：刻畫入微，淡然出塵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">41.清風(fēng)醉月傳幽韻，</p><p class="ql-block">傲骨迎春放暗香。</p><p class="ql-block">孫源<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：月下賞梅聞香，好雅興</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43.傲骨過關(guān)殲六將</p><p class="ql-block">雄風(fēng)臨陣敵千軍</p><p class="ql-block">施賦<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block">注：上，關(guān)羽，下，趙云</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：威武霸氣的哥倆，不服不行，響鐘吧</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.2.20勾股格：“水.慶.霞”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block">14.朝霞總映平安路</p><p class="ql-block">順?biāo)ＥR吉慶家</p><p class="ql-block">趙喫喧<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：立意佳，美好心聲正能量贊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">17.秋水文章堪慶羨，</p><p class="ql-block">晩霞畫卷可珍藏。</p><p class="ql-block">謝誰杰<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A—</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：鐘眼穩(wěn)當(dāng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">23.國慶泛舟驚水蔚</p><p class="ql-block">重陽登頂嘆霞蒸</p><p class="ql-block">肖昌軍<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：精神頭足，旅途愉快</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022年第二期2202.02.21六唱：“冬奧”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.蝶舞冰場生奧美，</p><p class="ql-block">龍騰雪道戰(zhàn)冬寒。</p><p class="ql-block">袁冰<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)；把冰雪場上運(yùn)動(dòng)員的灑爽英姿，高超技藝，奉獻(xiàn)精神展現(xiàn)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.瓦破臥能窺奧宇，</p><p class="ql-block">衣寒蜷可過冬天。</p><p class="ql-block">范圍<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：人窮志不短，有理想有抱負(fù)，妥妥的正能量。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">4.空地滑冰贏奧趣，</p><p class="ql-block">寒天堆雪玩冬情。</p><p class="ql-block">丹心<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：把灑脫，輕松之氣躍然呈現(xiàn)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block">2022.02.23一唱：“全安”</p><p class="ql-block">響鐘：</p><p class="ql-block">4.全意攻吳王濬勇，</p><p class="ql-block">安心保宋岳飛忠。</p><p class="ql-block">李興富<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：英雄本色，踏實(shí)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">6.全整山房三石立，</p><p class="ql-block">安熙市井四書藏。</p><p class="ql-block">范圍<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：淡泊安靜之氣不錯(cuò)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10.全憑妙手丹青繪；</p><p class="ql-block">安得明心黑白分。</p><p class="ql-block">王志成<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：有理</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">20.全節(jié)不嘗周室粟</p><p class="ql-block">安身已辦范家船</p><p class="ql-block">穆之<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：忠貞與淡然并存，甚是安全</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">21.全無俗念風(fēng)云淡，</p><p class="ql-block">安足生涯日月悠。</p><p class="ql-block">戴新<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：立意好，心胸開闊，很好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">25.安得靈丹除疾患</p><p class="ql-block">全憑濁酒長精神</p><p class="ql-block">張梅<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：人各有活法，開心就好</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">27.安貧顏?zhàn)泳幽嘞铮?lt;/p><p class="ql-block">全節(jié)蘇卿臥雪庭。</p><p class="ql-block">張聲文<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：淡然自若非你莫屬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">30.安心生產(chǎn)收成好</p><p class="ql-block">全意經(jīng)營待遇高</p><p class="ql-block">師傅<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：新穎，正能量</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.02.24碎錦格：“精彩無限”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5.千載精神何有限</p><p class="ql-block">一時(shí)光彩自無多</p><p class="ql-block">穆之<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：一寸光陰一寸金，勸君莫惜金縷衣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35有限春光添異彩，</p><p class="ql-block">無邊野色隱精華。</p><p class="ql-block">孫源<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：春光無限美好時(shí)光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.02.25湯網(wǎng)格：“雨水酥”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block">2.雨潤春山凝翡翠，</p><p class="ql-block">水流秋壑漾柔酥。</p><p class="ql-block">周建濤<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：水本無光，因畫得彩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">16.水漫春江逢澍雨，</p><p class="ql-block">花開曉日捧瓊酥。</p><p class="ql-block">張聲文<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：春風(fēng)春雨春花艷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">26.雨落窗前蕉葉翠，</p><p class="ql-block">水洇河岸柳心酥。</p><p class="ql-block">淡墨<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：不錯(cuò)，葉還有再酌余地</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.02.28鴻爪格：“小月光”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block">9. 院外橫塘溫月色</p><p class="ql-block">亭前小陌泄春光</p><p class="ql-block">巫瑞庭<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：好個(gè)泄春光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10.釣月溪頭閑小子；</p><p class="ql-block">追風(fēng)光里老狂夫。</p><p class="ql-block">范圍<span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">評(píng)：不錯(cuò)，悠閑自得</span></p><p class="ql-block">、</p><p class="ql-block">19.一棹閑情撩月色</p><p class="ql-block">三杯小酒醉春光</p><p class="ql-block">劉超<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：情酒對(duì)仗只能A-，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">但不這樣又不A，下比有人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">24.小紅有愛陽光送，</p><p class="ql-block">寶玉無知月色迷。</p><p class="ql-block">袁桂杰<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block">注:上比賈府落難之時(shí)小紅</p><p class="ql-block">一直在默默的為鳳姐奔走，</p><p class="ql-block">重情之人；下比寶玉的新娘被調(diào)包</p><p class="ql-block">還全然不知。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：還好，小紅有見識(shí)有情有義知恩報(bào)恩當(dāng)贊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">38.詩成小院秋光暗，</p><p class="ql-block">酒醒寒齋月色涼。</p><p class="ql-block">郎中<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：鐘眼穩(wěn)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.01碎錦格：“窮寇莫追”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block">8.圖窮拔劍追無及，</p><p class="ql-block">寇至橫戈志莫移。</p><p class="ql-block">張聲文<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：勇往直前失志不移</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">15.人到窮時(shí)休作寇；</p><p class="ql-block">心追貴者莫為倀。</p><p class="ql-block">林仕堅(jiān)<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：正能量贊一個(gè)，A-是我個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，就為志氣可嘉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">18.流寇途窮當(dāng)擊鼓，</p><p class="ql-block">追兵勢猛莫鳴金。</p><p class="ql-block">陳國華<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：乘勝追擊一網(wǎng)打盡</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">????</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2022.03.02鼎峙格：“春雷響”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">響鐘：</span></p><p class="ql-block">5.夜起雷光嘶斷續(xù)；</p><p class="ql-block">春來泉水響連環(huán)。</p><p class="ql-block">范圍<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：形象</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">9.春來化雪千流響，</p><p class="ql-block">雨至驚雷萬物酥。</p><p class="ql-block">袁桂杰<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：春風(fēng)化雨千山翠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">18.雷聲入夏非常響</p><p class="ql-block">地面回春的確潮</p><p class="ql-block">施賦<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：干脆利落，是該響</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">36.春花沐雨鳴蟲響</p><p class="ql-block">野樹驚雷宿鳥飛</p><p class="ql-block">劉超風(fēng)<span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">A-</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">評(píng)：驚蟄了</span></p>