<p class="ql-block">易奇佳:挫折點(diǎn)、情緒點(diǎn)寫(xiě)得具體</p> <p class="ql-block">梁紫涵:情緒點(diǎn)寫(xiě)得精彩</p> <p class="ql-block">陳穎霖:挫折點(diǎn)、情緒點(diǎn)寫(xiě)得不錯(cuò)</p> <p class="ql-block">陳曉敏:分段寫(xiě)挫折點(diǎn)</p> <p class="ql-block">駱鑫航:情景式開(kāi)頭</p> <p class="ql-block">陳鎮(zhèn)聰:動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)細(xì)致</p>