<p class="ql-block">【醉春風】春雨</p><p class="ql-block">作者/魚兒（挪威）</p><p class="ql-block">忽忽天將暖。甘霖情繾綣。平云流水落珠璣，看?？??？?。霽景如詩，碧洲如洗，臥虹橫岸。</p><p class="ql-block">綠野熏風伴。桃李芳徑遠。粉香枝上柳鶯啼，囀。囀。囀。三月春光，萬千春意，賦聲春愿。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">小荷點評：這首詞的寫得清新明快，尤其是下片“粉香枝上柳鶯啼，囀。囀。囀“，三個囀用得好，仿佛使人聽到了黃鸝滴瀝婉轉的聲音?！叭麓汗?，萬千春意，賦聲春愿”，三個“春”疊用，更覺無限春光浩浩而來，有不可阻擋之勢。</p> <p class="ql-block">英文回譯（趙宜忠John）：</p><p class="ql-block">天突然匆匆地從寒冷變暖。及時雨不停地灑落。像珍珠般的小雨滴從天上落下</p><p class="ql-block">靜觀。靜觀。靜觀。雨后景色如詩，綠洲像洗，彩虹橫臥兩岸。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">山上的綠野暖風相伴。漫長小徑兩旁有令人興奮地桃李樹。大聲啾啾。大聲啾啾。大聲啾啾。三月春光，萬千春意，賦聲表達了春愿。</p> <p class="ql-block">To the Tune of the Drunk Spring Wind.</p><p class="ql-block">The Spring Rain</p><p class="ql-block">By 魚兒 (Norway）</p><p class="ql-block">Tr. by 趙宜忠John （Czech Republic）</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Suddenly It will be soon warm from chill；</p><p class="ql-block">The timely rain it doth ceaselessly spill.</p><p class="ql-block">The pearl-like small raindrops fall down from the sky</p><p class="ql-block">Look still. Look still. Look still.</p><p class="ql-block">After rain shows poem-like scene;</p><p class="ql-block">Like wash looks the island green;</p><p class="ql-block">Th' rainbow lie across banks of rill.</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Along with th' warm wind are green fields on hill;</p><p class="ql-block">By the long path the blooming peach and plum trees thrill.</p><p class="ql-block">On the pink fragrant twigs the willow warbles crow;</p><p class="ql-block">Loud trill. Loud trill. Loud trill.</p><p class="ql-block">The march's nice scenery in spring,</p><p class="ql-block">The myriad of feelings of spring,</p><p class="ql-block">The ode sounds express the spring will.</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">譯文譯法！1，一個漢字一音步，即倆個英文音節(jié)。2，步原詞韻，一韻到底。3，此外兩片倒數三四行采用了對行韻。</p> <p class="ql-block">【畫春堂】牡丹花</p><p class="ql-block">作者/魚兒（挪威）</p><p class="ql-block">一枝獨秀萬般嬌。翠屏綺襯紅綃。暖風催得暗香撩。蝶繞裙腰。</p><p class="ql-block">如此天姿芳魄，籬前幾度魂銷。了知移植自天朝，嗟嘆鄉(xiāng)遙。</p>