<p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">指導(dǎo)老師：張伯利 男，1953年6月出生，籍貫，陜西長安，陜西省詩詞學(xué)會(huì)顧問，咸陽老年大學(xué)詩詞鑒賞班老師。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">詩詞鑒賞班二0二五年春季班</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?第三次作業(yè)</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">七絕或七律·風(fēng)箏</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">張伯利老師：七律 風(fēng)箏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">縱目八方綠意濃，白云繞我萬千重。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">緊系纖腰牽一線，脫卻素手到九空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">比翼輕捷一隊(duì)雁，傍身威武兩條龍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">借風(fēng)遙向春深處，茂盛青青掩紫紅。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">1. 高飛行</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">風(fēng)箏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">隨風(fēng)起舞逞才能，自傲云端笑燕鷹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">莫問青春夢(mèng)何許，命懸玉手一絲繩。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">2. 杜寶軍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">搖搖擺擺細(xì)絲牽，變幻翻騰紙鷂鳶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">今爾凌空舒廣翼，它年伴我探星天。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">3. 劉娓妮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">形態(tài)萬千醉碧空，云前起舞慕飛鴻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">雖然總被纖絲扯，卻有蒼天借我風(fēng)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">4. 曹少萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">草長鶯飛紫燕嬌，村邊紙鷂任風(fēng)搖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">小童嬉笑抬頭望，彩影飄悠過二橋。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">5. 毛應(yīng)林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">欲乘春色上云端，引線紙鳶飛夢(mèng)圓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">牽扯實(shí)為高放手，共收遠(yuǎn)景兩成全。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">6.劉穎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">七絕.風(fēng)箏（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">紙鳶借勢(shì)上蒼穹，炫耀輕揚(yáng)舞碧空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">莫羨飛行天際遠(yuǎn)，細(xì)絲牽拽立回匆。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">7.李愛琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">七絕.風(fēng)箏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">爺孫追笑放紙鳶，五指翻飛直上天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">偶遇飛鴻驚叫起，回眸相望醉心甜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">8. 楊繼康</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">紙鳶應(yīng)愧大鵬名，但借繩系假羽豐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">借勢(shì)穿云青空上，風(fēng)吹繩斷杳無蹤。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">9. 韋萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月柳絲衣袂靚，稚童拽線紙鳶牽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能穿界始皇稟，盛世您應(yīng)來秒觀。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">10. 李萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 七律 風(fēng)箏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">餐風(fēng)借力上青霄，一線牽云故里遙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">彩翼徘徊銜暮靄，輕軀笑傲破春潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">絲繩漫綰鄉(xiāng)愁起，竹骨猶擎客夢(mèng)飄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">縱使天涯羈旅久，歸心總是向家瞧。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">11. 郭有成 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">彩鳶逸逸戲東風(fēng)，喚醒童萌綺夢(mèng)濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">志攬星河奔遠(yuǎn)路，九霄云漢縛金龍。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">12. 吳惠琴 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">紙鶴浮風(fēng)素手牽，銀絲遙系碧天邊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">嫦娥一見自欣喜，邀至蟾宮金桂園。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">13. 張桂玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">隨風(fēng)曳影叩云窗，一線牽懸掌上藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">幾度扶搖凌碧野，仿如纏縛好時(shí)光。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">14.賀勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">身著彩紙線輪牽，舞弄輕風(fēng)上九天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">斜影飛霞繩細(xì)斷，面羞飄逸落河灣。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">15.孫寶玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">七絕.風(fēng)箏（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">能匠精心制不凡，順從長線搶沖前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">陽平四月云托起，動(dòng)魄高翔遙外天。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">16.劉治</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">扶搖直上彩云間，笑看雄鷹腳下旋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">何須登髙憑??翅，但依風(fēng)勢(shì)可登天。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">17.劉秦崗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">飛花逐線趁風(fēng)酣，稚子牽繩笑滿衫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">忽見紙鳶棲碧樹，斜暉影里喚聲甜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">18.蒙吉品</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">彩翼扶搖萬里追，鳶飛九域倚風(fēng)雷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">浮沉碧海平凡事，新歲逢春又戀歸。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">19.李亞杰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">彩身鋼骨趁風(fēng)輕，一線牽云入碧空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">眺望群山圍綠水，心隨雁影向春行。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">20.李擴(kuò)繼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹骨裁云紙作衣，東風(fēng)借力破重圍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">忽驚斷線凌空去，化作青鸞向日飛。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">21.張志鵬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">爭先恐后奔云端，獵奇斗艷誰占先？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">莫笑燕鷹無耐力，春夢(mèng)全系一線牽。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>審核:張伯利</i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>組稿:李萍</i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>監(jiān)制：韋萍 張桂玲 毛應(yīng)林</i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>美篇制作:李亞杰</i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>圖片來自網(wǎng)絡(luò)</i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>2025. 4. 19</i></b></p>