<p class="ql-block">@所有人</p><p class="ql-block">華夏微型詩社第571期周周發(fā)同題創(chuàng)作開始了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 歡迎詩友們參與微型詩寫作!請早日構(gòu)思打磨!</p><p class="ql-block">備注:</p><p class="ql-block">1、投稿、收稿時間:</p><p class="ql-block">12月9日晚上7點——10點。</p><p class="ql-block">2、每人選投一首微型詩。</p><p class="ql-block">3、請單獨發(fā)帖,不要自行接龍,由巴山一松老師統(tǒng)一收稿。</p><p class="ql-block">4、稿件選編到美篇,并由詩社老師擇優(yōu)予以點評。</p><p class="ql-block">5、本期題目:</p><p class="ql-block">①《校園往事》 </p><p class="ql-block">②《冬夜》</p><p class="ql-block">6.出題老師:昨夜星</p><p class="ql-block">7、每人可以投兩首。</p><p class="ql-block">8.優(yōu)秀作品推薦“微詩坊”。</p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">[選評作品展示]</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/飛馬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">操場南角的銀杏葉 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">砸中遲到鈴的尾音 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我們被罰站成金色的標本</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">林中霞光讀詩:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 微詩意象凝練,畫面感十足。以“銀杏葉”“遲到鈴”“罰站”三個意象勾連校園記憶,構(gòu)思精巧;中句通感手法,”“砸中”一詞動態(tài)連接落葉與鈴聲,使得畫面靈動鮮活;末句“站成金色的標本”一語雙關(guān),既寫落葉覆身的模樣,又藏青春記憶的定格,含蓄有余味。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/葦強</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤筆,寫一首情詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">借微弱月色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">讓愛驅(qū)逐入侵的寒冷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瑞雪豐韻淺析:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 一首冬夜抒情微型詩,作者以執(zhí)念內(nèi)涵,巧妙書寫“孤筆”詩語,道出了大多數(shù)詩人的心聲,借微弱月色,寫出了凄婉月夜孤單寂寞,也可喻:塵世間淡泊名利墨筆情裊,也可喻:淡淡人生的足跡,讓愛驅(qū)逐入侵的寒冷,也可喻:作者借季節(jié)變化寒冬深思來襯托出:繁華詩壇雜音,入侵靈魂心境……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/飛馬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">操場南角的銀杏葉 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">砸中遲到鈴的尾音 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我們被罰站成金色的標本 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瑞雪豐韻淺析:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 一柱思華年,一弦回憶童年時光碎片情歌驚現(xiàn)眼眸,校園天真活潑可愛的情景,入筆讀者視角,那操場南角很杏葉,那砸中遲到鈴尾音,那被罰站成的金色標本,很溫暖寫出了童話般世界,也寫出了童真習性,那優(yōu)美如畫的校園意境深深懷念,使文風更上一層樓,校園投來了春天般浪漫,作者巧用墨香蝶飛的情思來填補失去年華的意義及光緒……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/往往醉后</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冷風 揉碎了思念</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">讓你我的故事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一朵一朵飄落在夢里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瑞雪豐韻淺析:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 該文作者借冷風 揉碎了思念,襯托出抒情的詩歌內(nèi)涵,讓你我的故事,人生誰沒有一往情深故事?生活就是在故事里滋養(yǎng),一朵一朵飄落在夢里,筆者很形象以意象性雪花來執(zhí)筆詩人失控的情緒及輕盈浪漫的愛詩如絮情結(jié),來自不易……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/付光渝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">粉筆灰輕吻窗欞的風</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">筆尖洇著少年未說的心動</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴喚醒半闕青澀舊夢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巴山一松簡評:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> ”粉筆灰”,“筆尖”,”少年”,“青澀舊夢”,多個詞語去呈現(xiàn)校園,去扣題。幾個意象巧妙結(jié)合完成詩題。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/岐麟散人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">操場角 第一次偷抽煙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">教棍輕輕落下</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">呵斥聲里 漏出半粒春天</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巴山一松簡評:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 三行構(gòu)成一個完整的故事,故事里有犯錯,“偷抽煙”,老師的教育,老師對學生的愛,“教棍輕輕落下”“呵斥”,細節(jié)描述里更有對老師的尊散和懷念。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/古道白楊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">借桌洞偷傳朦朧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心跳的感覺歷經(jīng)風雨洗禮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">依舊初戀般驚悸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巴山一松簡評:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 青少年校園情感初露的描寫,無論成功與否,都是難以忘懷的。微詩就表達這樣的主題,言簡意明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/綠柳楓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">適合圍爐,劈幾闋宋詞作柴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">煮幾首唐詩佐酒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">慢慢熬,一場春暖一場花開</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜星簡評:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 這樣的冬夜暖意融融,詩意滿滿,愜意得很!這是文人向往的寧靜和享受的美好時光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/東方虹雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">泡一壺山楂 疏通文字筋絡</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">借霜風月色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">捂熱 這首情詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜星簡評:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 冬夜燈下閱讀,泡一壺山楂,美哉,樂融融。有月光的夜晚,為遠方寫一首情詩,蕩漾的情感,在今夜很美!</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/江南風</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">分界線,方寸在書桌之間</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">爭到畢業(yè)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">離別,淚潤得笑臉好甜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜星簡評:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 分界線是表面的君子約定。眼神,肘部,書本,文具盒不經(jīng)意間越界了。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">記住的是美好,離別總讓人心間惆悵。校園往事,是淙淙的山泉水,甜甜地潤澤著人生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/雨灑第一季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪吻梅花,映紅半窗月色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">扯一縷柔情</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鎖住故鄉(xiāng),為娘親融化鬢角釅霜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜星簡評:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 雪。梅花。半窗月色。這樣的夜晚,這樣的景色,喚起作者心中的思念之情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/葦強</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤筆,寫一首情詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">借微弱月色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">讓愛驅(qū)逐入侵的寒冷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岐麟散人淺讀:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 以孤筆襯冬夜清寂,借月色傳情,用愛驅(qū)寒立意。意象雖簡卻落點真切,將清冷夜色與熾熱情意相襯,人間自有愛情在。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/飛馬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">操場南角的銀杏葉 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">砸中遲到鈴的尾音 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我們被罰站成金色的標本 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岐麟散人淺讀:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 詩人借銀杏葉、遲到的鈴、遭罰站等幾個校園具象場景點題,“砸中尾音”“站成金色標本”鮮活傳神,也是校園中經(jīng)常見到的場景,字句含趣見真,滿是青澀回憶的鮮活張力。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/往往醉后</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冷風 揉碎了思念</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">讓你我的故事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一朵一朵飄落在夢里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岐麟散人淺讀:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 以冷風揉碎思念造境,給微詩定下凄美之調(diào),隨之將你我故事飄落夢中。清冷冬夜裹綿長情愫,字句間蘊含愁緒與牽掛,令人惆悵唏噓。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">[參與同題展示]</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/付光渝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪粒敲窗 燈影輕晃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半盞溫茶融盡伊人的寒涼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">炊煙低繞里舊夢悠長</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/付光渝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">粉筆灰輕吻窗欞的風</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">筆尖洇著少年未說的心動</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴喚醒半闕青澀舊夢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/岐麟散人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">操場角 第一次偷抽煙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">教棍輕輕落下</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">呵斥聲里 漏出半粒春天</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/岐麟散人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">針尖馱著燈影爬山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白發(fā)陡峭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">補丁里 鉆出一簇棉花云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/陳果果</span></p><p 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class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">咯吱咯吱耍成了刀馬旦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/丹霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">籃球場上</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">年輕時小兔子的我</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蹦跳狂樂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/丹霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">星星眨著眼睛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒風呼嘯原野</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪花飛舞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事 </span></p><p 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style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/喜陽柳保宅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">旱上的太陽照進教室</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">粉筆末飄到?jīng)]合上的本子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">畢業(yè)照折痕里藏著蟬嗚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/蔡厚炳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青澀 蕩漾在彼此明眸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心中的小鹿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">未敢觸碰那層紙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/古道白楊</span></p><p 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style="font-size:20px;">月亮是一滴眼淚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凝結(jié)的一塊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校園往事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/水巷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">同學爭搶投籃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">因為籃球架下</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">有一雙美麗的眼睛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/葦強</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤筆,寫一首情詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">借微弱月色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span 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