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style="font-size:20px;">綠蟻閑斟舉玉杯（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">侵枕濤聲眠未妥（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">敲窗蕉影醒難寧（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草廬高臥謀天下（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">妙計(jì)頻施譽(yù)蜀中（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">銀篝未熄溫紅獸（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">金盞滿斟待玉麟（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">侵枕濤聲眠未妥（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翻窗月影夢(mèng)難安（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草廬高臥謀天下（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">羽扇輕搖定霸圖（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">銀篝未熄溫紅獸（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉漏猶殘滴冷更 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">侵枕濤聲眠未妥（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">敲窗月影夢(mèng)難成 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草廬高臥謀天下（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">羽扇輕搖安四方 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">銀篝未熄溫紅獸（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">冰輪欲墜臥碧波 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">侵枕濤聲眠未妥（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">透窗月影看猶憐 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草廬高臥謀天下（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span 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style="font-size:20px;">侵枕濤聲眠未妥（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">思鄉(xiāng)心境夢(mèng)難成 (不亦l(xiāng)e乎）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草廬高臥謀天下（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蘭村重游賞月中 (不亦l(xiāng)e乎）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">銀篝未熄溫紅獸（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">金釜初熔煮白云 (胡蘿卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">侵枕濤聲眠未妥（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">思鄉(xiāng)春夢(mèng)志難酬 (胡蘿卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草廬高臥謀天下（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寶帳盡粹全成空 (胡蘿卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">銀篝未熄溫紅獸（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉筆頻沾染素箋（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">侵枕濤聲眠未妥（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">搖窗竹影緒難寧（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草廬高臥謀天下（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">羽扇閑搖定蜀都（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">銀篝未熄溫紅獸（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">金盞閑斟邀皓月（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">侵枕濤聲眠未妥（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">盈眸月影念難休（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草廬高臥謀天下（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">羽扇閑搖運(yùn)帳中（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">銀篝未熄溫紅獸（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">金鴨正燃待玉人 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">侵枕濤聲眠未妥（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">入幃月色怨猶濃 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草廬高臥謀天下（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鶴氅恒披報(bào)圣君 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">出句簡(jiǎn)析：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首聯(lián)出句：銀篝未熄溫紅獸</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析: 情景聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 銀篝：指銀質(zhì)的或銀飾的熏籠。清陳維崧《霓裳中序第一?詠水仙花次尹梅津詠茉莉韻》詞：“珠櫳寒粉靨愄罷，銀篝紅獸熱?！?lt;/p><p class="ql-block"> 紅獸：指燒紅的獸炭。 唐皮日休《夜會(huì)問(wèn)答》詩(shī)之五： “金火障，紅獸飛來(lái)射羅幌?！?lt;/p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 銀質(zhì)熏爐的火苗還沒(méi)有熄滅，正烘暖著那尊紅色的獸形擺件。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句“溫”字是聯(lián)句中詩(shī)眼，既寫(xiě)出銀篝余火烘暖器物的物理狀態(tài)，又暗蘊(yùn)溫情脈脈的氛圍；“未熄”二字則拉長(zhǎng)了時(shí)間感，讓靜態(tài)的場(chǎng)景生出一絲綿延的韻味：</p><p class="ql-block"> 可能是閨人的懷思，也可能是閑居者的遣懷，盡顯古典詩(shī)詞“意在言外”的審美特質(zhì)。</p> <p class="ql-block">二聯(lián)出句：侵枕濤聲眠未妥</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析：情景聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 陣陣濤聲涌入枕邊，擾得人難以安然入眠。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句“侵”字用得極妙，將無(wú)形的濤聲賦予主動(dòng)的侵襲感，生動(dòng)寫(xiě)出濤聲的穿透力；“妥”字樸素傳神，精準(zhǔn)描摹出輾轉(zhuǎn)難眠、心神不寧的狀態(tài)。</p><p class="ql-block">? 出句的核心意象是枕畔濤聲，以聽(tīng)覺(jué)意象切入，勾勒出夜宿江畔或海邊的場(chǎng)景。濤聲本是自然之聲，卻成了擾眠的緣由，營(yíng)造出清幽中帶著些許煩擾的意境，暗含羈旅之人的孤愁或心事重重者的煩憂。</p> <p class="ql-block">三聯(lián)出句：草廬高臥謀天下</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析：詠懷聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我）在簡(jiǎn)陋的茅草屋里安然高臥，心中卻在謀劃著天下大勢(shì)。</p><p class="ql-block"> “高臥”一詞反差感極強(qiáng)，既寫(xiě)出居處的閑適淡然，又暗含胸懷大志的沉穩(wěn)氣度；“謀”字直點(diǎn)核心，將潛藏的雄心與格局托出，一靜一動(dòng)間張力盡顯。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句核心意象是草廬與天下，以“草廬”的簡(jiǎn)陋、狹小，對(duì)照“天下”的廣闊、宏大，形成強(qiáng)烈的空間與格局反差，勾勒出隱士身居陋室卻心懷社稷的高遠(yuǎn)意境，極易讓人聯(lián)想到諸葛亮臥龍崗隱居、謀劃三分天下的典故。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句無(wú)一字言志，卻借“草廬高臥”的閑適與“謀天下”的壯志相對(duì)照，傳遞出懷才者的從容與抱負(fù)，兼具隱逸之趣與濟(jì)世之志，盡顯古典文人的理想情懷。</p> <p class="ql-block">審閱：芳草 云朵 楊柳岸 朱簡(jiǎn) 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng) 文心 笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">組稿：云朵 琢玉 雨燕 荷花 元其 笑對(duì)人生 老丁 元豐 文心 淡定 美西洋 燕燕于飛 ANG.ZQ 震撼哥 劉義 大海 弦思 不亦l(xiāng)e乎 胡蘿卜 若水 梧桐 笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后為序）</p><p class="ql-block">編錄：笛里關(guān)山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 以上簡(jiǎn)析僅代表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，因?qū)W識(shí)水平有限，難免有不妥之處，歡迎各位師友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句為芳草老師精選集句</p><p class="ql-block">②對(duì)句為師友們?cè)瓌?chuàng)</p><p class="ql-block">③圖片根據(jù)意境由AI創(chuàng)作</p>