<p class="ql-block">閑看門中木(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">淺埋土里根(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對仗工整平仄對應(yīng),上下句的末字"根″和"木″一對上,有"木″必有"根″,便把上下聯(lián)緊密地聯(lián)系起來形成一個整體。拆字聯(lián)能對得如此自然流暢,毫無生拼硬湊的痕跡,不虧為一幅佳聯(lián)。</p><p class="ql-block">9,16</p> <p class="ql-block">月照荷塘靜(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">星懸柳岸寧(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">赤火紫煙繞綠葉(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">青松白雪壓紅梅(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)雖對仗工整平仄對應(yīng),但出句末三字全為平聲,出場就犯了"三平尾″之忌,可改"壓″為"抱″以解"三平尾″之困,改后如下:</p><p class="ql-block">赤火紫煙環(huán)綠葉</p><p class="ql-block">青松白雪抱紅梅</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)。</p> <p class="ql-block">柳雨半坡添翠色(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">荷風(fēng)十里送清香(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">樹一苑,花一苑,情思裊裊意纏繞(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">星滿天,月滿天,眷戀悠悠心掛牽(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄,平平仄,平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平,仄仄平,仄仄平平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">遠(yuǎn)岫含煙云靄靄(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">鄰湖吐氣霧朦朦(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">歲月塵中空懷舊(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">人生路上總喜新(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">山靈水秀云過境(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">樹茂花香雨留痕(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">山高藏月色(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">水靜映星光(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">菊色紛紛沾玉露(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">桂香陣陣醉秋陽(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評論精靈評:</p><p class="ql-block">詩意盎然,秋意濃濃??!?? 能問下這首詩的靈感來源嗎???</p> <p class="ql-block">風(fēng)吹霧散青山秀(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">雨落煙生綠水羞(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對仗工整平仄對應(yīng)意境契合,且尾字羞與秀同聲同韻不同調(diào),讀來頗有韻味。</p> <p class="ql-block">黛瓦紅窗一人醉(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">青荷綠柳百鳥飛(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,17</p> <p class="ql-block">樹一苑,花一苑,情思裊裊意虧欠(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">星滿天,月滿天,眷戀悠悠心掛牽(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄,平平仄,平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平,仄仄平,仄仄平平平仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對仗工整平仄對應(yīng),描繪出戀人在星月滿天的夜晚在花木繁盛的苑中思念牽掛著對方,感覺對對方在情感上有所虧欠的場景。</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)還妙在"欠″和"牽"同聲同韻不同調(diào),讀來韻味悠長,盡管對聯(lián)并無押韻的要求。</p> <p class="ql-block">馬踏敵營三更鼓(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">兵撲寇帳百面旗(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">歲月有情業(yè)興旺(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">山河無恙國富強(qiáng)(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">一絲酒味飄新舍(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">幾縷茶香繞古軒(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">青山有韻云出彩(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">綠水無言柳弄姿(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">才高八斗驚天地(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">氣壯九州泣鬼神(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">月照荷塘靜(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">星懸柳岸寧(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">人間煙火暖四季(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">日子碗碟香三餐(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對仗工整平仄對應(yīng),但出句末三字全為仄聲因而導(dǎo)致對句末三字全為平聲,犯了"三平尾″之忌,使整聯(lián)成了病聯(lián)。</p><p class="ql-block">姑且對著吧。</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評論精靈評:</p><p class="ql-block">這對聯(lián)真有意思,生活氣息滿滿!??有沒有更多這樣的佳句分享呢???</p> <p class="ql-block">幾縷清風(fēng)花弄影(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">一絲細(xì)雨草伸頭(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,18</p> <p class="ql-block">云行萬里風(fēng)指路(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">日走一巡月接班(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">貧在鬧市無人問(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">富居深山有客求(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">霧鎖青山云作帳(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)搖綠樹雨當(dāng)簾(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">一身正氣鬼都怕(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">兩袖清風(fēng)人自閑(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">春賞百花冬賞雪(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">左觀三色右觀車(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平平仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">三色乃紅綠黃信號燈也。每天都要過馬路,先左看信號燈,后右看后方來車,安全守則是也。</p> <p class="ql-block">絮雨無言親萬樹(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">春風(fēng)有韻醉千山(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">絮雨:春雨的雅稱</p> <p class="ql-block">雨無眷戀風(fēng)無怨(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">云有相思月有愁(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,18</p> <p class="ql-block">墨染宣紙書心事(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">情融硯池寄戀人(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">觀人間冷暖(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">看世界繁華(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,19</p> <p class="ql-block">落筆千言思緒遠(yuǎn)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">鋪箋萬語戀絲長(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">春風(fēng)搖綠柳(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">暖雨撫青荷(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評論精靈評:</p><p class="ql-block">暖雨撫青荷,真是絕配!????有沒有更多這樣的佳句呢?期待看到更多作品!??</p> <p class="ql-block">云卷千峰色(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">霧遮萬壑形(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">詩吟千首方入境(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">句對百聯(lián)才開頭(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">犁筆耕云種月(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">墾書灌雨收星(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">抽簽配偶很篤信(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">許愿脫單超虔誠(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對仗工整平仄對應(yīng),但出句末三字全為平聲,出場就犯了"三平尾″之忌,姑且對之。若將"超″與"很″位置對換可解"三平尾″之困。</p> <p class="ql-block">長亭古道別時淚(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">小棧殘窗住處愁(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">金戈映日寒?dāng)衬?出句)</p><p class="ql-block">鐵馬挾風(fēng)壯我心(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">藍(lán)天作紙云作墨(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">綠地出詩水出歌(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">水邊短椅披星色(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">花岸長亭臥月光(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平仄仄平) 9,20</p> <p class="ql-block">平平安安以盼(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">坎坎坷坷相隨(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">弄文書歲月(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">執(zhí)筆畫丹青(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">鶯歌柳岸風(fēng)細(xì)細(xì)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">燕舞花園雨綿綿(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">鐵馬踏塵嘶號角(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">金戈迎戰(zhàn)壯旌旗(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">陶罐存歲月(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">保單護(hù)人生(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">哈哈,無意中做了保險代言人[笑哭]</p> <p class="ql-block">旌旗號令穿炮火(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">戰(zhàn)鼓催征踏狼煙(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">金戈破陣驚殘寇(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">鐵馬橫刀傲敗兵(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">山高藏月色(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">水靜映星光(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,21</p> <p class="ql-block">把酒臨風(fēng)邀月醉(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">擁茶踏露望星明(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">風(fēng)送桂香飄巷遠(yuǎn)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">露凝楓色漫坡紅(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">靜寫深讀寄抱負(fù)(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">輕吟淺唱抒情懷(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對仗工整平仄對應(yīng)意境契合,但出句末三字全為平聲,一出場就犯"三平尾″之忌,導(dǎo)致對句末三字全為仄聲,整聯(lián)成了病聯(lián)。姑且對之吧。</p><p class="ql-block">若將"寄″和"抒″調(diào)換一下位置,如何?</p> <p class="ql-block">柳弦慢擺風(fēng)吟曲(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">荷筆輕搖水寫詩(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">水映青山生秀色(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">云催喜雨降甘霖(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,22</p> <p class="ql-block">南窗望月桂香漫(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">北院觀星菊韻纏(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">西窗剪燭詩情涌(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">北案研墨畫意興(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">操天下頭等大事(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">干世間末微零活(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">新俗話說:操xxx的心吃xxx的命。唉一一,</p> <p class="ql-block">號角吹征塵漫卷(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">旌旗展炮火橫飛(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">軍馬騰空刀帶露(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">戰(zhàn)袍染血漬凝霜(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">星垂院落迷琴韻(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">月探窗欞盜墨香(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,23</p> <p class="ql-block">戰(zhàn)途防冷雪凝帽(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">征路伴寒霜浸靴(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">四季輪回天不老(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">三餐往復(fù)地難荒(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">緣木求魚空費(fèi)力(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">守株待兎亂勞心(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">落花有意隨流水(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">飛雨無心自駕風(fēng)(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">杏眼一睜含玉露(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">桃腮半綻沐春風(fēng)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">半窗冷月牽新緒(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">一院寒星惹舊情(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">明月悄懸松梢上(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">朗星靜掛柳葉間(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">養(yǎng)性體安可避禍(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">讀書身健即為福(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對仗工整平仄對應(yīng)語境契合,但出句末三字全為平聲,出場就犯了"三平尾″之忌,導(dǎo)致對句末三字全為仄聲。若將即(平聲)改為就(仄聲)可破"三平尾″之困。改后如下:</p><p class="ql-block">養(yǎng)性體安能避禍</p><p class="ql-block">讀書身健就為福</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)。</p> <p class="ql-block">號角吹時旌旗動(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">狼煙起處壯士行(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,24</p> <p class="ql-block">寒霜冷浸征夫甲(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">朔雪冰凝戰(zhàn)士刀(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">成家謹(jǐn)慎興家旺(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">創(chuàng)業(yè)容易守業(yè)難(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">晨露沾衣香滿袖(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">曉風(fēng)戲帽霧盈衫(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">鐵血男兒戰(zhàn)沙場(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">柔情女子迎凱旋(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">流霞釀酒一杯醉(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">落日烹茶兩盞醺(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">風(fēng)拂綠柳飄銀絮(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">雨洗青荷滾玉珠(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">暮色籠山千樹黛(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">夕輝浮水萬波金(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評論精靈評:</p><p class="ql-block">這對聯(lián)兒太美了,讀著就讓人心曠神怡!??能問問是哪里的景色嗎?</p> <p class="ql-block">刀鋒掃盡人間惡(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">筆桿托全世上良(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,24</p> <p class="ql-block">清風(fēng)一語驚殘夢(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">細(xì)雨幾絲醒半眠(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">全字是王八(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">汆湯須入水(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">哈哈,王八入水啰[笑哭]</p> <p class="ql-block">全字是王八(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">鉤上用金勾(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">嘻嘻,金鉤釣王八吔[捂臉]</p> <p class="ql-block">全字是王八(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">殺鱉木支叉(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">咦,真讓人好奇,殺王八的時候木上支一個叉到底是要干啥[what]</p> <p class="ql-block">全字是王八(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">清潔先水洗(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">嗯,是的[偷笑]</p> <p class="ql-block">全字是王八(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">仙也羨山人(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">哈哈,確實挺有意思,那就再來一句,湊個整數(shù)吧[捂臉]</p> <p class="ql-block">請鑒賞:</p><p class="ql-block">一組超有趣的拆字對句(已不是對聯(lián)了)組合</p><p class="ql-block">全字是王八(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">鉤上用金勾(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">殺鱉木支叉(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">清潔先水洗(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">汆湯須入水(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">仙也羨山人(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">哈哈哈,一個出句引出五個對句,這六句竟然湊成一首蹩腳的松散聯(lián)系的順口溜!見笑了。</p> <p class="ql-block">冷月殘垣聞號角(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">寒星斷壁映旌旗(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">匹馬江湖憑膽氣(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">單槍武界靠功夫(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">煙火人間多少事(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">筆書世上幾何情(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">閑觀走蟻輕觀鳥(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">樂逗游魚靜逗貓(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">耕田種地犁歲月(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">灌墨耙書曬春秋(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">晨鐘敲落天邊月(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">暮鼓撞驚地外星(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)用字欠準(zhǔn)確,本應(yīng)是敲鼓撞鐘,現(xiàn)卻為撞鼓敲鐘,有點(diǎn)別扭。出句改敲為撞吧[捂臉]</p> <p class="ql-block">碧水一湖能養(yǎng)月(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">青山萬座可懸星(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,26</p> <p class="ql-block">風(fēng)調(diào)雨順千家喜(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">水綠山青萬戶春(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">樹下吟詩月相伴(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">園中奏曲星作陪(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">云枕青山風(fēng)入夢(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">霧披綠水雨當(dāng)簾(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">鐵馬踏破征塵路(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">金戈沖開戰(zhàn)火門(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄仄平平仄)</p><p class="ql-block">平平平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">鐵馬冰河將士夢(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">金戈雪地營盤旗(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對仗工整平仄對應(yīng)意境契合,但出句末三字全為仄聲,引出對句末三字全為平聲而犯"三平尾″之忌。如何破解,有待商榷。</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評論精靈評:</p><p class="ql-block">金戈雪地營盤旗,這下聯(lián)對得好工整??!?? 平仄和意境都很贊!你是怎么想出來的呢???</p> <p class="ql-block">刻盡滄桑雕傲骨(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">修全歲月煉丹心(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">酒里憂愁少(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">茶中快樂多(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">四書早說人際事(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">八卦難破世間情(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,27</p> <p class="ql-block">幾絲細(xì)雨添新趣(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">一縷清風(fēng)送舊愁(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">他們互分于時光老去(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">你我相遇在歲月洪流(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄平平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平仄仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">萬點(diǎn)星光綴夢境(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">一輪月色陪鼾聲(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對仗工整平仄對應(yīng)意境契合,但出句末三字全為仄聲,導(dǎo)致對句末三字全為平聲,犯了"三平尾"之忌,姑且對著吧。</p> <p class="ql-block">種田種地種希望(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">讀報讀書讀未來(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">鐵馬踏翻疆場雪(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">金戈揚(yáng)起戰(zhàn)旗風(fēng)(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">文人筆下多風(fēng)骨(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">武士刀頭少鬼魂(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">南吃米飯北吃面(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">夏賞荷花冬賞梅(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">長簾細(xì)雨,一杯老酒(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">小榭清風(fēng),半盞新茶(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄,平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平,仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">細(xì)雨邊隔簾嘗酒</p><p class="ql-block">清風(fēng)里坐榭品茶</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評論精靈評:</p><p class="ql-block">這對聯(lián)兒韻味十足,感覺能聞到茶香和酒香了!????能問問這是哪里的風(fēng)景嗎?</p> <p class="ql-block">借來人間一支筆(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">還去世上萬卷書(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄仄仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,28</p> <p class="ql-block">千壑藏矮寺(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">萬峰見高人(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">半溪流水招新怨(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">一院落花惹舊愁(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">剩酒無意沾書韻(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">殘燭有情照墨痕(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">酒入愁腸消寂寞(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">詩出滿腹伴孤獨(dú)(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">月移竹影窗含畫(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">星掛柳梢水泛詩(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄平仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,29</p> <p class="ql-block">無官無財常作樂(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">有病有債總煩憂(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">鐵馬刀鋒劈戰(zhàn)火(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">金戈劍影覆征塵(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">柴門半掩聞犬吠(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">草舍一開見雞啄(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">節(jié)節(jié)蓮藕泥中睡(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">粒粒草莓葉下眠(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">皓齒清純夸彩景(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">明眸秀慧映紅燈(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">一輪明月思千里(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">滿目朗星戀萬家(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">老酒一壺溫故事(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">新茶兩盞熱新聞(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">新聞要熱</p><p class="ql-block">故事宜溫</p> <p class="ql-block">更深草睡星光暖(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">夜靜花眠月色柔(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">讀書打盹答題笨(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">做飯糊鍋洗碗滑(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">9,30</p> <p class="ql-block">鐵馬征塵連戰(zhàn)鼓(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">金戈炮火展旌旗(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">星沉四野天漸曉(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">霧散一方日初升(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">夜雨敲窗驚寂寞(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">涼風(fēng)入戶探孤獨(dú)(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">炮火旌旗夾號角(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">狼煙戰(zhàn)鼓繞烽臺(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">寒山古寺籠殘霧(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">冷殿貧僧臨惡風(fēng)(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">清風(fēng)問我何時老(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">細(xì)雨答它此刻煩(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">劍盾雪霜穿大漠(對句)</p><p class="ql-block">戈矛烽燧照邊關(guān)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)</p>