<p class="ql-block">鄰里情濃?；ブ?出句)</p><p class="ql-block">社區(qū)誼厚屢相幫(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">這對(duì)聯(lián)真溫馨，社區(qū)精神贊一個(gè)！??有沒有什么具體的互助故事可以分享呀？</p><p class="ql-block">10，16</p> <p class="ql-block">月落西山萬(wàn)物靜(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">星垂北嶺千家寧(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此出句末三字全為仄聲，導(dǎo)致對(duì)句末三字全為平聲而犯"三平尾″之忌。上下句末字寧和靜換個(gè)位置，如何？</p> <p class="ql-block">天天快快樂樂(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">月月平平安安(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此上下句是再平常不過的口頭語(yǔ)，出句末四字全為平聲，比對(duì)聯(lián)之忌"三平尾″更甚，就當(dāng)聯(lián)句對(duì)之吧。</p> <p class="ql-block">德比大地能載物(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">信及長(zhǎng)天可服人(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">清茶一杯談天下(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">老酒兩盞論古今(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">云垂水面翻細(xì)浪(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">霧鎖江亭籠薄紗(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">心灰意冷心已死(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">藕斷絲連愛尚存(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">兩根竹筷嘗萬(wàn)物(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">一口鐵鍋?zhàn)銮r(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">明媚漫鋪踏岸賞(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">暗香浮動(dòng)隔溪聞(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄仄平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平平仄平平平</p> <p class="ql-block">晚月出海上崗(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">夕陽(yáng)下山回家(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對(duì)仗工整平仄對(duì)應(yīng)，意境契合且生動(dòng)有趣。可惜出句末三字全為平聲，開口就犯"三平尾″之忌，且在不改變?cè)獾臈l件下暫無(wú)平仄調(diào)整的辦法。姑且對(duì)之吧。</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">這對(duì)聯(lián)太美了，意境深遠(yuǎn)！????能分享創(chuàng)作靈感嗎？</p> <p class="ql-block">春風(fēng)聞酒訪深巷(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">暖雨喜茶饞淺杯(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">半畝菏塘能盛月(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">一方柳岸可掛星(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄仄平) 10，17</p> <p class="ql-block">江山萬(wàn)里凝浩氣(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">雨露千家暢和風(fēng)(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">歲月如刀刀刀狠(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">人生似箭箭箭難(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">肩挑日月游天下(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">背靠星辰論古今(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">箭射星辰驚大地(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">弓開日月破蒼穹(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">劍氣橫空三萬(wàn)里(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">俠心立地?cái)?shù)千年(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">漢賦元曲千年韻(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">唐詩(shī)宋詞萬(wàn)古情(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">歲月匆匆人易老(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">時(shí)光淺淺愿難全(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">歲月刻蝕著面相(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">時(shí)光蒼老了容顏(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">紅唇半啟含香韻(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">杏眼一開泛玉波(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">星枕青山云作被(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">月棲碧水柳為簾(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">玉露濕階星探院(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">松風(fēng)叩戶月敲門(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">三代同堂盈喜氣(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">二人共枕滿歡心(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">柴米油鹽皆是愛(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">酒茶奶藥總關(guān)情(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">母愛無(wú)聲千里遠(yuǎn)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">家和有報(bào)百年興(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">10，18</p> <p class="ql-block">歲月如歌翻新頁(yè)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">時(shí)光似水越舊年(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">江山入畫何須筆(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">歲月出詩(shī)不用聲(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">熊腰虎背失艷遇(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">玉骨冰肌盼良緣(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">手有積書易對(duì)句(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">胸?zé)o點(diǎn)墨難出聯(lián)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)出句犯"三平尾″之忌，姑且對(duì)之。若上下句"對(duì)″與"出″調(diào)換位置，即:</p><p class="ql-block">手有積書易出句(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">胸?zé)o點(diǎn)墨難對(duì)聯(lián)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">如何？</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)聯(lián)好工整，文化底蘊(yùn)深厚！??能分享創(chuàng)作靈感嗎？期待更多作品！</p> <p class="ql-block">一曲相思誰(shuí)人共(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">滿心暗戀哪位知(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">明月當(dāng)空花弄影(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">朗星試水柳騷姿(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">10，19</p> <p class="ql-block">人生受苦別受罪(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">歲月磨人亦磨心(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">月朗星稀天似水(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">花明草密地為根(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">鳥語(yǔ)引路竹間遛(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">荷香襲人柳下眠(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">一臉刻板死鬼樣(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">滿肚詼諧活佛名(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此上下句對(duì)仗工整平仄對(duì)應(yīng)，生動(dòng)描繪了兩種性格截然不同的人物形象。但是出句后五個(gè)字全為平聲，比對(duì)聯(lián)"三平尾″之忌更甚，此上下句難稱對(duì)聯(lián)了。姑且對(duì)之吧。</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">這對(duì)對(duì)聯(lián)真是太有趣了，活佛名和死鬼樣對(duì)比鮮明啊??能透露下創(chuàng)作靈感嗎？期待更多作品！??</p> <p class="ql-block">獨(dú)抱濃愁無(wú)好夢(mèng)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">自消淺慮具寬心(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">愁愁愁，愁容滿面(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">喜喜喜，喜氣盈門(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平，平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄，仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">10，20</p> <p class="ql-block">歲月似歌兼似水(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">人生如戲亦如棋(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">酒盡杯空人已去(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">茶余罐滿客還來(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">人生有愛而無(wú)限(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">歲月無(wú)聲亦有痕(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">清風(fēng)明月藏禪意(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">玉露朗星啟悟心(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">螞蟻搬家蛇過道(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">蜻蜓點(diǎn)水鳥挪窩(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">雨露霧風(fēng)賦茶曲(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">琴棋書畫詩(shī)酒花(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">一分耕耘，一分收獲(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">幾份貢獻(xiàn)，幾份報(bào)答(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平平，平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄仄，仄仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">這句話真是金玉良言，努力和回報(bào)總是成正比的！你是怎么堅(jiān)持下去的呢？????</p><p class="ql-block">10，21</p> <p class="ql-block">殘花無(wú)蝶戀(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">寡婦有漢求(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">聚朋飲酒常敘舊(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">交友聊天久生情(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">尋山問水追云跡(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">訪古游今踏雨痕(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">歲月似歌高低韻(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">人生如戲冷暖情(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">殘陽(yáng)掛樹炊煙密(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">暮靄擁村犬吠稀(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">這下聯(lián)接得好唯美，意境深遠(yuǎn)！??你是怎么想出來的？</p><p class="ql-block">10，22</p> <p class="ql-block">風(fēng)吹三山五岳(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">雨過四海七洲(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">雨落清潭無(wú)覓處(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)刮老樹有留痕(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">稚子追蝶逐巷尾(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">親娘護(hù)幼到街頭(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">閑人免進(jìn)賢人進(jìn)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">啞客難留雅客留(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">無(wú)求便是安心法(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">有信堪為處事方(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">我把相思寄明月(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">君將掛念托燦星(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">粗茶淡飯百家味(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">碧草繁花十里香(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">倦客思鄉(xiāng)歸路遠(yuǎn)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">離人念故恨時(shí)長(zhǎng)(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">時(shí)光似箭還似水(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">歲月如歌亦如潮(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">一世雪霜一世暖(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">半生風(fēng)雨半生安(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">天寒地凍一杯酒(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">日麗風(fēng)和半盞茶(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">燈下半杯苦酒(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">灶前一碗甜湯(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平平仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">灶前甜湯暖心，燈下苦酒也別有一番風(fēng)味呢！????有沒有更多這樣的對(duì)聯(lián)分享呀？??</p><p class="ql-block">10，23</p> <p class="ql-block">搖搖晃晃水中月(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">隱隱約約云里星(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">兩口無(wú)言順我意(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">三生有幸識(shí)君顏(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對(duì)仗工整平仄對(duì)應(yīng)，生動(dòng)描寫了一對(duì)青年男女初次見面時(shí)又滿意又拘謹(jǐn)?shù)膱?chǎng)景?？上С鼍淠┤秩珵槠铰暥?quot;三平尾″之忌，且暫時(shí)還想不出一個(gè)恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~替換"識(shí)″字。姑且對(duì)之吧。</p> <p class="ql-block">窮不讀書苦一輩(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">富而布善甜萬(wàn)家(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">遠(yuǎn)走高飛知始點(diǎn)(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">寒來暑往守初心(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">月落寒江沉玉鏡(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">星浮暖水散銀鱗(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">柴門月色融詩(shī)意(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">草舍星光入畫情(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">10，24</p> <p class="ql-block">月照湖舟靜(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">星懸岸柳寧(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">鬢辮青絲垂秀色(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">眉唇粉脂露羞顏(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">鳥盡人稀冰覆路(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">天寒地凍雪盈門(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">雞鳴鴨噪傳暮靄(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">犬吠牛哞伴炊煙(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">酒中憂愁少(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">茶里喜樂多(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">燈映書案字生暖(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">筆行信箋詩(shī)御寒(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">清風(fēng)入窗翻書頁(yè)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">細(xì)雨臨院染墨香(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平仄仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">10，25</p> <p class="ql-block">水蕩云舟風(fēng)擺渡(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">山鄰霧岸雨搭橋(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">兵荒馬亂難度日(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">地利人和好安生(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">往事如塵風(fēng)雨路(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">今生似箭雪霜痕(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">歲月如歌歌不盡(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">人生似水水長(zhǎng)流(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">10，26</p> <p class="ql-block">人間百味皆嘗盡(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">道路千折未走完(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">江山不老(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">歲月長(zhǎng)流(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">這對(duì)聯(lián)妙啊，感覺穿越時(shí)空了！能分享創(chuàng)作靈感嗎？????</p> <p class="ql-block">清風(fēng)有意千山秀(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">綠雨無(wú)心萬(wàn)水羞(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">筆墨紙硯皆出彩(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">梅蘭竹菊盡入詩(shī)(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">兩峰對(duì)弈云觀陣(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">一水獨(dú)吟雨助威(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">蛙鼓池塘催夜雨(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">燕穿柳岸喚晨風(fēng)(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">兩峰對(duì)弈云觀陣(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">一水獨(dú)吟雨伴音(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">博覽群書開眼界(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">廣游各地闊胸懷(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">笑從心底起(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">福自善根生(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">福自善根生，好對(duì)！?? 有沒有更多這樣的佳句分享呢？期待看到！??</p> <p class="ql-block">月移青山動(dòng)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)住碧水寧(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">生活工作雙滿滿(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">事業(yè)愛情兩茫茫(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">清晨伴鳥唱(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">傍晚聽蟲嗚(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)出句即犯″三平尾″之忌，姑且對(duì)之。</p> <p class="ql-block">藍(lán)天萬(wàn)年云似錦(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">綠野千里草如茵(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">10，27</p> <p class="ql-block">論今無(wú)定人研史(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">懷古有緣客醉書(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">雨打青荷倔(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)吹綠柳柔(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">天寒地凍清風(fēng)冷(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">室暖茶溫?zé)釟怅?對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">春臨門巷福盈戶(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">喜降院廊樂滿家(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">紙上談兵車馬炮(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">軍前點(diǎn)將旅團(tuán)營(yíng)(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">小販吆喝穿巷尾(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">商家廣告掛街頭(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">眼含秋水尋真愛(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">眉展遠(yuǎn)山恨假心(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">青荷擺雨呈畫意(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">翠柳扶風(fēng)送詩(shī)情(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">青荷擺雨真是美極了，詩(shī)意盎然！??有沒有更多這樣的佳句分享呢？期待！??</p><p class="ql-block">10，28</p> <p class="ql-block">離鄉(xiāng)總是回頭望(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">送子時(shí)常舉目追(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">業(yè)精于勤荒于嬉(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">人立在信敗在奸(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄仄仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">這對(duì)聯(lián)擲地有聲，道出了成功的秘訣！?? 你平時(shí)是怎樣磨練自己的呢？</p> <p class="ql-block">云遮霧掩青山秀(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">雨過風(fēng)拂碧水悠(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">我在詩(shī)里流浪(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">君于畫中墾荒(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">業(yè)精于勤荒于嬉(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">家穩(wěn)在儉敗在奢(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄仄仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">柔風(fēng)慢過柳園徑(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">細(xì)雨輕敲竹院窗(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">閑坐窗前讀妙句(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">靜思椅上對(duì)佳聯(lián)(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">10，29</p> <p class="ql-block">柳雨喜逢蓮蕊艷(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">荷風(fēng)輕送藕池涼(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">社區(qū)笑語(yǔ)時(shí)時(shí)起(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">鄰里歡聲日日聞(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">寒窗十年磨一劍(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">熱卷四場(chǎng)競(jìng)首名(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄仄仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">風(fēng)吹云卷千層浪(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">雨散霧遮萬(wàn)頃波(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">千峰鍍金云瀉玉(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">萬(wàn)壑藏寶霧翻銀(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">山重水復(fù)疑無(wú)路(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">火暗煙明定有人(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">清風(fēng)一縷穿堂過(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">細(xì)雨萬(wàn)絲進(jìn)院來(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">春播千畝稻(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">夏養(yǎng)百塘魚(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">抬頭望月月不語(yǔ)</p><p class="ql-block">舉手邀星星無(wú)聲</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此出句未三字全為仄聲，導(dǎo)致對(duì)句末三字全為平聲而犯″三平尾″之忌，姑且對(duì)之。若將末字位置對(duì)換，如何？</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">詩(shī)意盎然，感受到你對(duì)韻律的講究了！?? 調(diào)換末字位置聽起來確實(shí)更順耳，你覺得呢？???</p> <p class="ql-block">銀河不見一滴水(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">玉宇卻含萬(wàn)片云(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">狂風(fēng)卷地沙石起(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">暴雨遮天樹葉飛(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平) 10，30</p> <p class="ql-block">三餐煙火三餐暖(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">四季景觀四季新(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平平仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄仄平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">詩(shī)顯鬼才歌引月(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">筆留神韻字遺風(fēng)(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平平仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對(duì)句的核心特色在于以“鬼才”定調(diào)，以“引月”造境，用極簡(jiǎn)筆墨勾勒出詩(shī)人的不羈才華與浪漫意境，虛實(shí)結(jié)合，極具畫面感與想象力。</p><p class="ql-block">具體特色可拆解為三點(diǎn)：</p><p class="ql-block">1. 煉字精準(zhǔn)，人格化鮮明：“鬼才”二字是聯(lián)眼，跳出“天才”“奇才”的常規(guī)，直接點(diǎn)出詩(shī)人突破常理、詭譎靈動(dòng)的創(chuàng)作特質(zhì)，人物形象瞬間立住，"鬼才"與出句的"神韻″對(duì)仗工整。</p><p class="ql-block">2. 動(dòng)靜相生，意境浪漫：“詩(shī)顯”是靜態(tài)的才華展露，“歌引”是動(dòng)態(tài)的行為互動(dòng)；“月”這一古典意象被“引”字激活，仿佛詩(shī)人的歌聲有了魔力，能招引明月相伴，畫面浪漫且充滿仙氣，"歌引月″又與出句的"字遺風(fēng)″巧妙對(duì)應(yīng)。</p><p class="ql-block">3. “詩(shī)”與“歌”（同屬文學(xué)體裁）、“顯”與“引”（同屬動(dòng)詞，一靜一動(dòng)）、“鬼才”與“月”（一虛一實(shí)，一為人一為景）形成巧妙的內(nèi)在呼應(yīng)，讀來平仄鏗鏘，朗朗上口。</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">這對(duì)聯(lián)真是絕了！??能問問您是怎么想出這么好的意境的嗎？???</p> <p class="ql-block">細(xì)雨落塘荷挺綠(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">和風(fēng)拂岸柳垂青(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平仄仄平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">流云慢妝綠水面(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">落日輕吻青山眉(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄平仄仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平仄平平平)</p> <p class="ql-block">百年歲月二人共(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">千里姻緣一線牽(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平仄平平平仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">竹畔清風(fēng)翻書卷(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">柳邊細(xì)雨潤(rùn)畫魂(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄平平平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平仄仄仄仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">10，31</p> <p class="ql-block">半醒海角虛空夢(mèng)(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">一別天涯陌路人(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">狂風(fēng)大作雷聲吼(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">暴雨急來電影催(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄平平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平仄仄平)</p> <p class="ql-block">霜鋪野徑繡銀毯(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">露綴家園鑲玉壇(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對(duì)仗工整平仄對(duì)應(yīng)，按聯(lián)律對(duì)得天衣無(wú)縫；且意境十分契合，詩(shī)意濃郁；加之尾字"壇″與"毯″同聲同韻不同調(diào)，讀來更是韻味盎然。</p> <p class="ql-block">歲月如歌歌歲月(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">江山似畫畫江山(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄仄仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)極具口語(yǔ)化，其對(duì)仗工整平仄對(duì)應(yīng)，意境也比較契合，仍不失為一付好聯(lián)。</p> <p class="ql-block">人生漫漫易迷惑(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">歲月匆匆難駐留(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平平仄仄仄平仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄仄平平平仄平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)出句意指歲月匆匆而過一去不返，自不待說。</p><p class="ql-block">對(duì)句則描繪了人生的無(wú)奈。在漫長(zhǎng)的人生路上，人很容易陷入困惑、迷失方向?！叭松秉c(diǎn)出時(shí)間跨度長(zhǎng)、前路遙遠(yuǎn)；“易迷惑”是關(guān)鍵，即容易陷入困惑的狀態(tài)，全句指出人在漫長(zhǎng)歲月里，常會(huì)因前路未知、選擇太多或遭遇挫折，而看不清方向、搞不清初心，陷入茫然無(wú)措的狀態(tài)。簡(jiǎn)單說，就是“日子還長(zhǎng)，很容易走著走著就糊涂了、迷路了”。</p><p class="ql-block">頭條評(píng)論精靈評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">這對(duì)聯(lián)真是道出了人生的真諦??！歲月匆匆，我們都要珍惜當(dāng)下，找準(zhǔn)方向。??????有沒有更多這樣的佳作分享呢？</p> <p class="ql-block">計(jì)較為患拋腦后(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">吃虧是福記心間(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">(仄仄平仄平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">平平仄平仄平平)</p><p class="ql-block">此聯(lián)對(duì)仗工整平仄對(duì)應(yīng)，闡明了人際關(guān)系中基本的處事原則，多吃點(diǎn)"虧″少計(jì)較"利″，就能保持心境平和，就會(huì)得到福報(bào)。</p> <p class="ql-block">山水抱亭風(fēng)攬翠(出句)</p><p class="ql-block">月光鋪徑露凝珠(對(duì)句)</p><p class="ql-block">(平仄仄平平仄仄</p><p class="ql-block">仄平平仄仄平平)</p>