<p class="ql-block">指導(dǎo)老師無(wú)為齋主人</p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">2026.01.07</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">下期作業(yè):</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">1、出句:何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</b><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">（郭保旺）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">對(duì)句: （ ） </b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">注:①尋芳，動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，“芳”可寬為對(duì)名詞。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> ②琳瑯，連綿詞，可用并列詞相對(duì)。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">2、自撰詩(shī)聯(lián):</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">出題與點(diǎn)評(píng)老師</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">郭保旺</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"> <b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">新歲同開(kāi)新境界；</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 好春再寫(xiě)好詩(shī)聯(lián)。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>出句對(duì)句:</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；（郭保旺）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">不時(shí)懷舊，琴瑟聲中月滿窗。(劉建和)</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">點(diǎn)評(píng):</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)仗精巧，與出句意境一脈相承，情景交融，佳作當(dāng)贊。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">作業(yè):</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">1、出句:何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；（郭保旺）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句: 此時(shí)覓句，璀璨窗邊詩(shī)百篇。（郝建富） </b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">2、自撰詩(shī):</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">詩(shī)畫(huà)怡情</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">開(kāi)窗山入畫(huà)，眺望水云天。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">把釣修心處，吟詩(shī)享晚年。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)仗契合，意象豐滿，自然天成，體現(xiàn)了作者豐厚學(xué)養(yǎng)，妙對(duì)當(dāng)贊。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">自作詩(shī)尤佳！</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;"> 駿馬奮蹄馳大道；</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;"> 雄鵬展翅搏高天。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">侯松山下期作業(yè)：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、出句：何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；（郭保旺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句：誰(shuí)家對(duì)曲，翰墨林中韻萬(wàn)重。（侯松山）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注：1尋芳，動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，“芳”可寬對(duì)為名詞。2琳瑯，聯(lián)綿詞，可用并列詞組相對(duì)。2、自撰詩(shī)聯(lián)：足踏青山，萬(wàn)里山河皆瑞色；目極天下，九重世界盡春光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):對(duì)曲對(duì)尋芳，翰墨林中對(duì)琳瑯架上，韻萬(wàn)重對(duì)春千卷俱佳。只是“家”名詞，對(duì)“處”欠妥，對(duì)中、端、時(shí)、邊、前為宜，個(gè)見(jiàn)。自撰聯(lián)，佳聯(lián)當(dāng)贊。；</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李煥棟作業(yè):</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、出句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；（郭保旺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句: </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 此間拾翠，縹緲?lè)孱^綠萬(wàn)重(李煥棟) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幾吋統(tǒng)一，日月潭邊夢(mèng)萬(wàn)回。(李煥棟)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、自撰詩(shī)聯(lián):</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">辭舊迎新</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">臘鼓催春 晴光滿滿臨祥宅;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紅梅映雪 瑞氣盈盈慶吉年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第一對(duì)句:對(duì)仗精工，情景交融，自然和諧，一派新春美景。佳聯(lián)當(dāng)贊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">第二對(duì)句:下半句佳。上半句“吋”應(yīng)“時(shí)”屬筆誤，統(tǒng)一對(duì)尋芳欠妥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自作春聯(lián)，佳作當(dāng)贊。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句對(duì)句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷：C郭保旺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句：梅花獻(xiàn)瑞，丙午年頭酒一杯。（劉寬應(yīng)）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句：何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷：（郭保旺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句：平陶覽勝，古老城中景百宗。（劉寬應(yīng)）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自撰詩(shī)聯(lián)：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">馬踏新春行好運(yùn)：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人懷壯志展宏圖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">點(diǎn)評(píng):</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兩個(gè)對(duì)句，下半句俱佳。但上半句梅花改花間，平陶改此間為宜，個(gè)見(jiàn)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自作聯(lián)，佳作當(dāng)贊。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 百花齊放春光好；</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 萬(wàn)馬奔騰氣象新。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句對(duì)句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句；何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；（郭保旺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句；此方得趣，翰墨香中酒一杯。（郭彩萍）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):此方得趣對(duì)何處尋芳，佳句。翰墨對(duì)琳瑯，酒一杯對(duì)春千卷俱佳。但香對(duì)架欠妥，個(gè)見(jiàn)。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句對(duì)句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁金翠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閑庭拾韻，錦繡箋中月一輪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):拾韻對(duì)尋芳，佳，下半句月一輪對(duì)春千卷尤佳。但閑庭對(duì)尋芳欠妥，可改為庭前，個(gè)見(jiàn)。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 百花齊放春光好；</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 萬(wàn)馬奔騰逸興飛。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句對(duì)句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冀雅玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；（郭保旺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此間得趣，錦繡園中蝶一籬。（冀雅玲）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花間得句，翰墨筵中韻萬(wàn)篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):兩個(gè)對(duì)句對(duì)構(gòu)思精巧，意境豐闊，清新自然，足見(jiàn)造詣和動(dòng)力，佳聯(lián)妙對(duì)當(dāng)贊。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作業(yè)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.出對(duì)句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句上聯(lián)：郭寶旺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句下聯(lián)：溫丕彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">a</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今宵置酒，瀲滟杯中月一彎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">b</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此間揮筆，瑩潤(rùn)池旁景萬(wàn)端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.自撰詩(shī)聯(lián)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紅梅綻蕊辭殘臘；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉蝶飛英接早春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">點(diǎn)評(píng):構(gòu)思精妙，用詞優(yōu)美，對(duì)仗契合，佳聯(lián)當(dāng)贊。第一對(duì)句，今宵對(duì)何處，改為樓前對(duì)何處為宜，個(gè)見(jiàn)。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自作春聯(lián)，佳作妙聯(lián)。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句對(duì)句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">程永紅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">案前執(zhí)筆，山水畫(huà)中情萬(wàn)重。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):對(duì)仗工整，情景交融，清雅自然，畫(huà)面感強(qiáng)，佳聯(lián)當(dāng)贊。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> </b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 同欣春氣象；</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 共逐馬精神。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">王海良作業(yè):</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、出句對(duì)句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；（郭保旺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此間藏秀，縹緲湖中韻萬(wàn)重。（王海良）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2、自撰詩(shī)聯(lián):</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">賀晉中與珠海簽約結(jié)為“友好協(xié)會(huì)”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晉珠聯(lián)袂，共襄盛舉；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南北和弦，同譜華章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">善賢書(shū)院詩(shī)聯(lián)教育基地掛牌有寄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁村文脈溯流長(zhǎng)，書(shū)院賢聲翰墨香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">立雪傳薪承雅韻，裁云作賦譜華章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楹聯(lián)啟智昭明德，詩(shī)教凝心育俊良。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不負(fù)鄉(xiāng)邦鐘秀地，春風(fēng)化雨綻叢芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">點(diǎn)評(píng):構(gòu)思精巧，對(duì)仗工穩(wěn)，意境開(kāi)闊，畫(huà)面感強(qiáng)，佳聯(lián)妙對(duì)，點(diǎn)贊。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自作詩(shī)聯(lián)，俱佳。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁小彬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">茅廬有亮，錦繡囊中計(jì)萬(wàn)條。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):對(duì)句講求用典，構(gòu)思巧妙，意象豐富。但茅廬有亮對(duì)何處尋芳欠妥，改為“廬中藏秀”為宜，個(gè)見(jiàn)。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句對(duì)句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">崔曉清</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此時(shí)覓墨，山水花間景萬(wàn)重。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):構(gòu)思精妙，想象豐富，寓意深刻，畫(huà)面感強(qiáng)，佳聯(lián)。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"> <b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">萬(wàn)里揚(yáng)鞭同策馬；</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 群賢揮筆共書(shū)春。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張期望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">長(zhǎng)空回雁，次第書(shū)中意萬(wàn)重。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):想象豐富，氣勢(shì)宏大。但長(zhǎng)空回雁對(duì)何處尋芳欠妥。改為天邊飛雁要好一些，個(gè)見(jiàn)。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句對(duì)句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陰彩桃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此間覓韻，爛漫山中景萬(wàn)分。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):構(gòu)思巧妙，對(duì)仗工整，畫(huà)面感強(qiáng)，佳聯(lián)。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句對(duì)句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">許晉武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此時(shí)試墨，燦爛案頭筆一枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):對(duì)仗工整，構(gòu)思巧妙，與出句相得益彰，佳聯(lián)。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"> <b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">心田勤灌溉；</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 藝苑樂(lè)徜徉。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劉紅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">下期作業(yè):</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；（郭保旺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句: 此間得意，桃李叢中樂(lè)滿懷。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):對(duì)仗精工，構(gòu)思精妙，情景點(diǎn)融，佳聯(lián)。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；（郭保旺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">幾時(shí)統(tǒng)島，日月潭邊夢(mèng)萬(wàn)回。(李煥棟)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">點(diǎn)評(píng):構(gòu)思獨(dú)到，意象豐闊，統(tǒng)一祖國(guó)迫切之情躍然詞間，佳聯(lián)。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句:何處尋芳，琳瑯架上春千卷；（郭保旺）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">對(duì)句:此時(shí)有我，琥珀杯中趣十分。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">點(diǎn)評(píng):對(duì)仗工整，節(jié)奏分明，尋芳求知，杯中得趣，情境交融，意境優(yōu)美，佳聯(lián)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">程永紅</b><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">老師點(diǎn)評(píng)</b></p>