<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五絕?臘八粥</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">窗外寒星落，鍋中八寶香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">親情融釜底，暖意入肝腸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水云間賞評：以寒星襯八寶香，景暖情更暖?！叭诟住薄叭敫文c”由物及人，親情與暖意層層遞進(jìn)，質(zhì)樸動人。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">臘八粥</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">慢熬粥漸稠，細(xì)品意悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">難覓當(dāng)年味，思親淚暗流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?水云間賞評：慢熬細(xì)品，由粥味牽出“當(dāng)年味”，思親之情暗涌?！皽I暗流”含蓄克制，更顯深情，余味悠長。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七絕?臘八粥（通韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曉起圍爐慢火熬，甜香縷縷繞窗飄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">盛來一碗心頭暖，歲里清歡細(xì)細(xì)嚼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?水云間賞評：曉起圍爐、甜香繞窗，畫面溫馨?！靶念^暖”“細(xì)細(xì)嚼”，把歲末清歡寫得細(xì)膩有味，煙火氣十足。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">臘八節(jié)吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">臘日祭云風(fēng)冽天，珍饈五谷煮豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">銅鍋熬糯甜香溢，瓷碗呈祥福壽延。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">獻(xiàn)瑞一甌辭舊歲，迎春八駿啟新篇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">神州共沐清和景，粥暖千家笑語綿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水云間賞評：格律工整，對仗穩(wěn)妥，臘八與馬年迎春結(jié)合自然，粥香、福壽、笑語層層遞進(jìn)，畫面溫馨，意境祥和。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鷓鴣天?臘八節(jié)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">臘八欣逢大寒天。香融五谷煮豐年。?風(fēng)清川野梅爭俏，?雪霽峰巒竹自妍。?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?辭舊歲，賀新元。親朋圍坐話團(tuán)圓。?一鍋暖意千家沸，?笑語聲中福滿箋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水云間賞評：臘八逢大寒，五谷煮豐年，景美情濃。梅俏竹妍、圍坐團(tuán)圓，一鍋暖意、福滿箋，辭舊迎新，氣象開闊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p>