<p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">(網(wǎng)上出句)萬壑松風(fēng)生腋下;</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">(自己對(duì)句)滿山秋色到窗前。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【自按】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">先對(duì)作“滿天秋色…”云云,覺其寫景似乏著落,乃改為“滿山秋色…”云云,“萬壑”與“滿山”雖小嫌合掌,但意象飽滿,讀之朗朗,如此,亦好。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下一則,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">網(wǎng)上出句:蘭舟閑載春江月;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">注:圖片均來自網(wǎng)絡(luò)。</p>