<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者：胡楊林的回憶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇：1341463</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">音樂：草原戀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">圖片：網絡</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">山河入夢，歲月成詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:right;"><span style="font-size:22px;">——題記</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:right;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我想你了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這想念</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是沙棘在戈壁里扎根</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是駝鈴在回憶里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">搖醒沉睡的晨昏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其實 不必問緣由</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">當長風掠過荒漠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每道起伏的沙丘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">都在沉淀歲月的波痕</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有些風景 走過就淡了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">像吹散的塵煙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">唯獨你 在心上</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日夜生長溫存</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">從戈壁石的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紋路里漫出來</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫過我駐守的陣位</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">把每段過往</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">都凝成 不褪色的星辰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">倘若你 也停在</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">某段相似的晚風里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">就望望云吧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我們共同沐過的那片云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">正漸漸鋪展雄渾</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大雁 捎回了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遠方的月光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">你知道的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清輝之下</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">未唱完的軍歌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">就藏在梭梭的枝椏間</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">等待重逢</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">你記得界碑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">基座下總有堅韌扎根</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">你聽過的馬頭琴聲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">把余韻寄在歲月中</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">縱使篝火</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在無數個寒夜熄滅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">未訴完的衷腸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仍在礫石中微醺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">當春風拂過</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老虎丘 默念你</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">溫柔的名字</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">當霜雪掠過</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">敕勒穹廬 細數你</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?歷經的艱辛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不必找尋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我始終循著</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">你遼闊的脈搏呼吸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">在風沙遇見暖陽的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每一個清晨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我是你未消散的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那聲長嘶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是嵌進你脊梁的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那根不屈的韁繩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是蒼鷹守護的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那片澄澈的長空</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是你肩頭鎧甲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">默默守護的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那片安寧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">而所有牽掛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">都系在我的思念中</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">每逢春雨 浸潤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?北方的荒原</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">總有無名的草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">代替我</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">說出那句：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我想你了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">哨所旁的胡楊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是大地伸向蒼穹的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">另一根</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">剪不斷的情深</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鐵骨柔情老師賞析：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 這首以戍邊生活為底色的思念詩，將個人情愫與家國情懷織就成雄渾又細膩的經緯。 詩人以戈壁、駝鈴、界碑等邊疆意象為骨，把抽象的思念具象成沙棘扎根戈壁的堅韌、梭梭枝椏藏著的軍歌，讓思念脫離兒女情長的窠臼，染上了風沙磨礪的厚重。“我是你未消散的那聲長嘶，是嵌進你脊梁的那根不屈的韁繩”，以極具力量的喻體，將自我與戍邊者的精神深度綁定，使牽掛成為與家國安寧共生的信仰。 全詩以“我想你了”起筆收束，中間鋪展戍邊歲月的壯闊與深情，意象層層遞進，從個人思念升華為對戍邊群體的精神禮贊。戈壁的蒼涼、胡楊的堅韌、月光的溫柔交織在一起，讓思念既有風沙的粗糲，又有歲月沉淀的溫存，字里行間流淌著戍邊人對家國的忠誠，以及藏在堅守背后的柔軟牽掛。 </span></p>